Wednesday, May 6, 2009

You Creep In...


you creep in

through the shallow crevice
in the night sky
disguised as the moon


you creep in

like the sun’s third eye
gliding through the waves
and waters


you creep in

like a young sapling
fracturing the crust
of this wounded motherland


you creep in
you creep in


you creep in

like the forgotten scents
through the reverberations
of malignant winds


you creep in

like these poems
through the dark pipelines
of psychosis


you creep in

like the psychedelic dreams
through the metaphors
of reveries and slumber


you creep in

as these words
through the narrow crevice
on the skin of my loquacious mind

8 comments:

  1. Thats very interesting write, fellow poet :)

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  2. This poem is really intrstng n diffrnt......gud wrk sourik....it shws dt u hv found ur ladylove agn.......i espcially lyk d last 2 stanzas....beautifully written......

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  3. I forgot 2 mention......i love d picture....beautiful angel....truely depicts a moon goddess.....

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  4. Is this dedicated to someone? It seems so deep to be creeping from all sides...from everywhere...

    Congratulations for having this piece be on Top Pick of WOOF Contest.

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  5. I see... indeed this is for someone...and as you said, someone speacial. Keep inspired so more great poems we can expect from you. ^^

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  6. Congrats for woof.I actually returned yesterday.Nice similes in here.Lyrical, powerful and a bit of narcotic psychedelia involved in it as well...Freudian concepts?

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  7. this was indeed creepy ;) !! liked this one :)

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