Mistress of the sapphire moon
the sound of the distant drums
speak in the silence of this evening
speak in the silence of this evening
when the words sink in my soul
from the pages of this old diary
from the pages of this old diary
hailing those paranoid thoughts
stifling the unborn verses growing
in the womb of these poems
stifling the unborn verses growing
in the womb of these poems
tunes from the forgotten times
argue in my mind
and recreates a theatre of songs and roses
argue in my mind
and recreates a theatre of songs and roses
the blue world bursts like an atom bomb
on the canvas of a black universe
and I find myself trapped in
an orgy of green demons and pills
on the canvas of a black universe
and I find myself trapped in
an orgy of green demons and pills
ladylove,
does your smile still veil the secrets
and scents of unspoken truths?
and scents of unspoken truths?
do your eyes still hide the mysteries
of the sun and the stars?
of the sun and the stars?
I still offer my prayers at your doorstep
with poems inscribed on its skin
when dawn blossoms in the night sky
and robs the costume of slumber
off my shoulders
with poems inscribed on its skin
when dawn blossoms in the night sky
and robs the costume of slumber
off my shoulders
my dreams have long been lost
beneath the metaphors of your beauty
beneath the metaphors of your beauty
the prosodies have lost their way
in the hollow tunnels
enchanted by the echoes of your voice
in the hollow tunnels
enchanted by the echoes of your voice
the rainbows have long been frozen
by the winds of time
by the winds of time
memories still float like icebergs
on the cold oceans
which devour my tears and pains
on the cold oceans
which devour my tears and pains
when December curls like a dark cobra
beneath the acid viscera of my body.
beneath the acid viscera of my body.
I seriously loved the imageries in this....innovative is the word I guess.And what's good is that you haven't overdone it anywhere.
ReplyDeleteWhat I particularly liked about this piece was the alternate effects of sound and silence...the jerky slow pace contrasted with bursts of lyrical spontaneity.And this does evoke a sense of forlorn nostalgia.
About the srijan adda....I think I'm coming...yet I'm not sure.I'll get ion touch with u.Sorry that this comment took sometime to come.....I was still having my exams when you left a comment on my blog.I did however leave a comment in response to it on my blog.
It would be good if u could get in touch with me over phone before Srijan comes along.
"...hailing those paranoid thoughts
ReplyDeletestifling the unborn verses growing
in the womb of these poems..." <-- my favourite lines
i liked the mood of going back to the past that u've created...
You are again in love...my friend...am i not rite???
ReplyDeleteahaa! Eto khubi bhalo hoyechhe! I loved it :) How are you? Exams over?
ReplyDeleteHmm, aami parye 'vanish' hoye jaii! Please bear with me and write in.. I'll definitely reply as soon as i can! Let me know when all your exams are done and ..most importanly, give the exams well okay????
ReplyDeleteBest of luck!
tata!
prayeii*
ReplyDeletehey....this so sapphire...
ReplyDeletei can actually visualize how frozen rainbows be like...
good.