you creep in
through the shallow crevice
in the night sky
disguised as the moon
you creep in
like the sun’s third eye
gliding through the waves
and waters
you creep in
like a young sapling
fracturing the crust
of this wounded motherland
you creep in
you creep in
you creep in
like the forgotten scents
through the reverberations
of malignant winds
you creep in
like these poems
through the dark pipelines
of psychosis
you creep in
like the psychedelic dreams
through the metaphors
of reveries and slumber
you creep in
as these words
through the narrow crevice
on the skin of my loquacious mind
through the shallow crevice
in the night sky
disguised as the moon
you creep in
like the sun’s third eye
gliding through the waves
and waters
you creep in
like a young sapling
fracturing the crust
of this wounded motherland
you creep in
you creep in
you creep in
like the forgotten scents
through the reverberations
of malignant winds
you creep in
like these poems
through the dark pipelines
of psychosis
you creep in
like the psychedelic dreams
through the metaphors
of reveries and slumber
you creep in
as these words
through the narrow crevice
on the skin of my loquacious mind
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Thats very interesting write, fellow poet :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really intrstng n diffrnt......gud wrk sourik....it shws dt u hv found ur ladylove agn.......i espcially lyk d last 2 stanzas....beautifully written......
ReplyDeleteI forgot 2 mention......i love d picture....beautiful angel....truely depicts a moon goddess.....
ReplyDeleteIs this dedicated to someone? It seems so deep to be creeping from all sides...from everywhere...
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for having this piece be on Top Pick of WOOF Contest.
I see... indeed this is for someone...and as you said, someone speacial. Keep inspired so more great poems we can expect from you. ^^
ReplyDeletehaunting...
ReplyDeleteCongrats for woof.I actually returned yesterday.Nice similes in here.Lyrical, powerful and a bit of narcotic psychedelia involved in it as well...Freudian concepts?
ReplyDeletethis was indeed creepy ;) !! liked this one :)
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