tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.comments2023-04-05T02:27:16.127-07:00POEMS AND PARADISE..sourik_poetsparadisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03942748914941567016noreply@blogger.comBlogger63125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-76092821422430232832010-05-08T08:39:41.984-07:002010-05-08T08:39:41.984-07:00I donno if I should really be commenting but readi...I donno if I should really be commenting but reading this poem took me somewhere down the memory lane of my life....good to see that you didn't stop writing...God bless !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-21077305888241169232009-09-23T09:31:14.485-07:002009-09-23T09:31:14.485-07:00@purba: thanks...@purba: thanks...sourik_poetsparadisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03942748914941567016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-14643753591569769902009-09-22T05:52:04.379-07:002009-09-22T05:52:04.379-07:00This poem is a masterpiece in the world of dark po...This poem is a masterpiece in the world of dark poems....i wont call it dark entirely cuz it speaks of d thirst n d pain dt is felt wen sum1z ladylove betrays him n movez out...the grief is felt only by d poet bt d surroundings r yet d same happy onez, dat pierces d memories 2 d core n datz wat is expressed beautifully here.....Tamanna...The hidden sidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787940025830402853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-34216335792051000452009-08-11T13:48:36.198-07:002009-08-11T13:48:36.198-07:00I loved this! really for not having kept in touch....I loved this! really for not having kept in touch...stay wel...write in to me...I'l always reply..Rye..https://www.blogger.com/profile/00174115404089234818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-77398865326543040252009-07-05T23:52:44.674-07:002009-07-05T23:52:44.674-07:00It's awesome, Sourik! This poems evokes emotio...It's awesome, Sourik! This poems evokes emotions both of sadness and joy. The imageries that you have chosen are very different and leave a subtle impression on one's senses. Liked these lines that transport the reader to the world of mysterious fables:<br /><br />:The wind is soporific<br />hypnotizing the poet<br />with its cold whispers<br /><br />as he stands there<br /><br />frozen"<br /><br />Best regards,<br />SaimaSaima Afreenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13559120441585957512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-32500889840149349272009-06-27T13:07:27.441-07:002009-06-27T13:07:27.441-07:00@pratibha: Thanks a lot for your precious comment!...@pratibha: Thanks a lot for your precious comment!!! :) :)<br />@deeptesh: Thanks a lot , my friend , for your comment!!! I commented on your last poem..do check it out! :) :)sourik_poetsparadisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03942748914941567016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-25645089649232576452009-06-15T22:58:31.351-07:002009-06-15T22:58:31.351-07:00Great way to represent the pains that we poets und...Great way to represent the pains that we poets undertake while creation.A birth of an art....reminded me of Kubla Khan by Coleridge.Deepteshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-34479217994213578342009-06-15T22:56:13.421-07:002009-06-15T22:56:13.421-07:00Great dark images in here Sourik.It's scary,vu...Great dark images in here Sourik.It's scary,vulgar and still it deals with love!Like the color of seduction.....<br /><br />C my comment on ur last poem too.N c my blog.....<br /><br />Sorry.... I have even busy with this college stuff too.Deepteshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-36214300302514614052009-06-13T12:54:51.347-07:002009-06-13T12:54:51.347-07:00u r too awesome dude !! wow !!
ps: i deleted my a...u r too awesome dude !! wow !!<br /><br />ps: i deleted my account from fb .. u can catch me on my blog "my world in words" :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-60392352461049033702009-05-25T06:10:27.977-07:002009-05-25T06:10:27.977-07:00this was indeed creepy ;) !! liked this one :)this was indeed creepy ;) !! liked this one :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-67250987345501358472009-05-23T22:50:38.270-07:002009-05-23T22:50:38.270-07:00Some of your best imageries are in here....the unf...Some of your best imageries are in here....the unfurling of terror scene by scene as the reader walks slowly along the city of horror.The social horror has been truly and wonderfully portrayed in here!Deepteshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-73618181708386087222009-05-12T22:07:00.000-07:002009-05-12T22:07:00.000-07:00Congrats for woof.I actually returned yesterday.Ni...Congrats for woof.I actually returned yesterday.Nice similes in here.Lyrical, powerful and a bit of narcotic psychedelia involved in it as well...Freudian concepts?Deepteshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-28292240200578963442009-05-12T02:56:00.000-07:002009-05-12T02:56:00.000-07:00haunting...haunting...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-53484959319810238362009-05-09T23:11:00.000-07:002009-05-09T23:11:00.000-07:00I see... indeed this is for someone...and as you s...I see... indeed this is for someone...and as you said, someone speacial. Keep inspired so more great poems we can expect from you. ^^WebbieLadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12022359549820472945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-11518718917822709742009-05-08T08:20:00.000-07:002009-05-08T08:20:00.000-07:00Is this dedicated to someone? It seems so deep to ...Is this dedicated to someone? It seems so deep to be creeping from all sides...from everywhere...<br /><br /><A HREF="http://tales-details.blogspot.com/2009/04/woof-contest-top-picks.html" REL="nofollow">Congratulations for having this piece be on Top Pick of WOOF Contest.</A>WebbieLadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12022359549820472945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-87222566601230774822009-05-08T00:06:00.000-07:002009-05-08T00:06:00.000-07:00I forgot 2 mention......i love d picture....beauti...I forgot 2 mention......i love d picture....beautiful angel....truely depicts a moon goddess.....Tamanna...The hidden sidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787940025830402853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-6147167985626045922009-05-08T00:01:00.000-07:002009-05-08T00:01:00.000-07:00This poem is really intrstng n diffrnt......gud wr...This poem is really intrstng n diffrnt......gud wrk sourik....it shws dt u hv found ur ladylove agn.......i espcially lyk d last 2 stanzas....beautifully written......Tamanna...The hidden sidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787940025830402853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-61800316234713462192009-05-07T01:04:00.000-07:002009-05-07T01:04:00.000-07:00Thats very interesting write, fellow poet :)Thats very interesting write, fellow poet :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09612887576182909261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-17705414816171060522009-05-03T11:27:00.000-07:002009-05-03T11:27:00.000-07:00@deeptesh
thanks a lot brother for your precious c...@deeptesh<br />thanks a lot brother for your precious comments...yes, i did juxtapose platonic love with a bit of lust and sexuality in this poem because the verses in this signify more the enigma and sensuality associated with that evening rather than my imaginations...Thanks for your comments and have a good trip!!!<br /><br />@monorina<br />Thanks a lot for your comments<br /><br />@dibbasatya<br />Thanks a lot brother for your precious comments...but i am doubtful if the 'artist' here is referred to you :) :)<br /><br />@purba<br />pretty lady , i am not going to thank you for this...because i think you owed this to me...<br /><br />@rye<br />Thanks a lot for your comment...tumi shotti khub bhalo... thanks for encouraging me..law exam khub bhalo geche..asha korchhi peye jabo...please wish me luck!!!<br /><br />@Zorlone<br />Thanks a lot for your comments , my friend...Yeah, that evening is truly very significant for me...<br /><br />@alex <br />I would like to thank you profusely for your comments...i don't know if the P.S. was needed at all or not...but it's good to hear that you liked the poem...atleast , that satisfies this humble poet...<br /><br />@colorspot<br />Thanks a lot for your honest and precious comments...inamda and deeptesh are very very talented poets with a lot of depth and imaginations immortalising their creations...it's truly encouraging for this humble poet when he hears that his work reminds you of their creations...<br />Thanks a lot...i am honoured!!! :) :)<br /><br />@shahwar<br />I would like to thank you profusely for your precious comments...i was eagerly waiting for them...sourik_poetsparadisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03942748914941567016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-87724814760385923592009-05-03T04:25:00.000-07:002009-05-03T04:25:00.000-07:00hmm...
"from the dark celluloid of my mind
fell ...hmm...<br /><br />"from the dark celluloid of my mind <br />fell a dream <br />and slept <br />on the sinful pages of reality <br /><br /><br />(the artist watched from a distance)"<br /><br />is it possible for the artist to be distanced from his field of epiphany and ecstasy???<br /><br />an unexplained paradox!Shahwar Kibriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01366606022752780049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-70101402753736447092009-05-02T17:36:00.000-07:002009-05-02T17:36:00.000-07:00nice work. It juz reminds me of Inam's works. Even...nice work. It juz reminds me of Inam's works. Even deeptesh has the same pattern...ColorSpothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13133734861235407089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-5897144479853362622009-05-02T14:19:00.000-07:002009-05-02T14:19:00.000-07:00Could have done without the "P.S.," but "a fragile...Could have done without the "P.S.," but "a fragile universe / of cocoa and heroin" is very cool.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-49363981925340302632009-05-01T18:40:00.000-07:002009-05-01T18:40:00.000-07:00Sourik,
After reading the note at the bottom I u...Sourik, <br /><br />After reading the note at the bottom I understood why the poem was like that. Well, it sounded like you had a truly memorable experience. <br /><br />Zorlonezorlonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315933650875557697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-9167120715479588922009-04-24T06:20:00.000-07:002009-04-24T06:20:00.000-07:00sourik,I'm going out for a trip for more than two ...sourik,I'm going out for a trip for more than two weeks.So I'll stay offline.Stay well.Deepteshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5577006782754756563.post-51062442734495904612009-04-24T04:57:00.000-07:002009-04-24T04:57:00.000-07:00You know, there are a lot of times that one can't ...You know, there are a lot of times that one can't get thru' somethings... its bad...it gets frustrating, but the key is to keep on going on...the end is always good... or even when we think its bad...there's somehting really good in it.. I'm sure u'll get thru! Don't worry :)Rye..https://www.blogger.com/profile/00174115404089234818noreply@blogger.com